How are these lyrics of mine?

i really like the verses and the hook of the song. i dont understand what you mean by this is tie-dye in the chorus but im sure it would kick in if i heard how you want it to sound. You have a talent for writing and it is a simple nice little jam (how i read it anyways) i say maybe make the chorus more clear unless im just really bad at comprehension but i think you have a pretty good song right here. can't wait to hear it on the radio sometime. good luck with your musical career.